J.C. Belding

To put it plainly, the poem is both unclear and pointless. But hey as long as you tried your best it's okay. But you should really read some poetry before ...

You poem starts good but its quality fades away after a while. If you revisit it and make the entire piece sound poetic, you will be able to express your ...

You actually did a great job with sucha long poem. I know it's hard to do but you should adjust the meter a little bit so all of your rymes ...

Your piece has some good descriptors but they don't come together in the best way. This is why I believe it starts to get boring. Your opening and closing verses ...

Wow. I'm really impressed. The only thing I would change is "the messege of the soul" part. Just make some slight adjustments to make it run more smoothly. I believe ...

Your poem certainly has powerful emotion to it but your word choice and overall format really weighed it down. If you make some of these fixes your poem will really ...